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[Phys-L] Re: Eureka!



At 09:42 AM 12/6/2005, John C., you wrote:

Beyond the mix up in authors,

the Indian Serenade has the sappiest line
O lift me from the grass!
I die! I faint! I fail!

So first he dies, then faints, or just merely fails. This is
completely weak. He had to be under the influence to write this. It
actually sounds like a dream written by a very droopy lover.

By contrast Kublai Khan is very literate with great images and one
really doubts that it could have been written under the influence.

In either case accounts of dreams as inspiration are to be taken with
a grain of salt.

John M. Clement
Houston, TX

Here's an opening from a poem written by someone I know well:

I see the shining honesty,
the longing to be let alone,
or set free:
the hunger for a touch;
not just any touch,
the voice; not just any voice,
the presence, the longing for the presence,
the voice of course.
It's been too long: I know.
And the old familiar weakness of the marrow,
the bones of shivering jello.
[...]

Wonder what John C could possibly make of "Bones of shivering Jello" ?

Weak? Droopy? Undoubtedly! :-)


Brian Whatcott Altus OK Eureka!
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